June 21st, 2005
|nakedtoes||12:40 am - There must be more drabbling (even if it's very bad)|
Disclaimer: if they were mine, I wouldn't be inserting a disclaimer here.
Candles flickered about him, but he wasn’t yet ready to kel'no'rim.
In an alternate universe there had existed another Teal’c, one with no regard for human life. He lived no longer.
Teal’c remembered the years of silent rebellion, offering obeisance to a false god for lack of a way to fight. If he’d been offered an alternative that held any hope of success, he would have taken it; when O’Neill came to Chulak, he did.
The other had chosen poorly, and Teal’c was glad to have been the one to kill him.
He closed his eyes and breathed in deeply.
Current Mood: annoyingly awake
|Date:||June 21st, 2005 11:24 am (UTC)|| |
This is not very bad, in fact, I quite liked it. You captured him very well. Teal'c is one of my favorite characters, but I've never written him because I can't get his voice.
And there should certianly be more drabbling.
Thank you! I find Teal'c hard to write to, though I think I'm slowly easing into him. *prods everyone for more drabbles*
|Date:||June 24th, 2005 04:18 pm (UTC)|| |
I should put this comm on my flist so I notice when people update
You should write more Teal'c.
*snuggles* I would, but it's *hard*. I spent a couple of weeks trying to write in his POV for SoG-tag before giving up in disgust.
I really needed fic-love today though, so thank you. *clings*